Yes this last post is much better!
the rationale presents each side with a much better historical situation that would ALLOW the treaty to work. I accept the conclusion but the wording to get just the perfect list of what needs to be captured for the Japanese side may be necessary. AS you may remember the Soviets only ventured into Manchuria in order to make claims on lost territory ceded during the Japan-Russo war of 1904. In that war the Soviets (then Russians) lost the Shaklin Islands (spelling?) and wanted a place at the peace treaty just to gain some of that territory back. So in a historical context the attack on Japan in Aug 1945 was for this purpose. Stalin had no intention of fighting both the Germans and Japanese at the same time. He left two front wars for Hitler to engage in because its stupid to fight wars with limited resources.
The idea that japan has to accomplish a list of conquests before any action taken against the Soviets makes alot of good sense.
Japan should have to take out China, India, and Australia and selected islands before they could be in the position to attack the Soviets. This would be conjoined with our national victory conditions… right?
Also, sorry i was not reading your post on the penalty correctly… I have limited time sometimes and my posts suffer from it. Your rule is fine, but we have to have some combat modifier as well… What should actually happen is to create a NA for the “Siberian eastern army” which must stay at the eastern border until a certain turn. It would gain some modifier in combat against Japanese forces because they were much better trained soldiers and knew how to fight in frozen environments, while the Japanese clearly did not have a clue.
Idea:
The Soviets get some fixed army (research needs to be done) I think it should consist of:
4 infantry
1 armor
1 artillery
1 fighter
this would presumably be the siberian army ( again research)
your idea of the Germans having to be captured for a soviet attack is historical (germany lost in may 11 45, Soviets transfered the army to Manchuria and attacked on about Aug 6th 1945.
I would be noted that we dropped the A-bomb for many reasons and one of the main reasons was because we wanted the japanese to quickly surrender because we didnt want to Soviets to get too far into japanese territories and didnt want that area to turn into a 3rd world war. WE dropped the bomb because we wanted a quick surrender, because the Soviets were a competing ally that had its own agenda ( which brings up national victory conditions)