@aardvarkpepper good luck with your series guide for 1942.
Otherwise, this is an incredibly imprecise criticism. There are parts that seem self-contradicting, at least one area that is misleading and at least one area where you argue against a claim I did not make. It sounds like you haven’t read Don’s Essays in the original or in its entirety. Also, I can’t tell if you’re criticizing my editing of the original essays or my editorial note.
Your very last paragraph is excellent though.